Commentary and Constructive Criticism

While the toll roads and taxes may be expensive, how do you expect to fund an infrastructure reform comparable to San Francisco? These toll roads can help to indicate the recent population increase in Austin through the traffic influx. These are the only holes I see in your logic, which is otherwise strong and direct. The fact that you boycott the toll road is reason enough for me to believe that you have a strong opinion regarding this subject matter and that you know what you are talking about. You could use more real life examples of Austinites being frustrated with this toll. Overall this editorial conveys your point. One thing you should do is consider the opponents point of view when constructing an opinionated piece such as this and prove their possible arguments wrong with strong facts and examples.